When did it suddenly become cool to hate everything? It's a growing problem, especially in the entertainment world, and no one benefits from an increasingly hard to please, pessimistic audience.
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October 7, 2006
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1.-- the general look is kinda flat one,and from my experience,that's never something good
To give it more depth,try adding some impression of "light coming this way" with the help of gradients.
2.--The text at the top is too cartoony,you should make it look more...evil,demonish
3.--Maybe try to add some gradient to the text boxes...? :/
PS.: Well,that's just what I think,as I said,I'm no expert,just saying from common sense...
These comments were written with excedingly severe attitude,with professional,absolutely-flawless entry in mind! So if you don't want/need professional stuff,you can overlook them
For day-to-day/ordinary use,the entry looks great.
I also thought I should change the font of the title.
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Thanks for the comment
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And this isn't bad for a start. I don't know why you picked Flash for display medium when a GIF would have sufficed. But that aside, your colour scheme needs some work. The mood text is very difficult to read for me, as is the font text when it fades into the black at the bottom. Might I suggest white for the general font colour (including the header)? And instead of black for the top part, maybe a dark red, or instead of fading from bright red to black, maybe a darker shade of red to black?
And the boxes aren't lined up. I know this is the effect you were after, but it might look better if they were more 'random', or more lined up.
Hope all this helps you, and good luck
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Anyways, well, I tried your suggestions on the font color, the gradience and alignment. Thanks
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